The Go-Kart Race
Wilma and Biff saw a notice. It was about a go-kart race. Then, Wilma had good idea. Biff and Wilma were excited. They told Mum about the race. Mum found the old go-kart, but it was broken and rusty. Biff said “Oh no!”. Biff asked to Dad about repair go-kart. After, Mum and Dad made a new go-kart. Mum painted the go-kart. Chip helped to Mum. When Biff looked at the new go-kart, she wanted a go. But, Mum said she couldn’t. The paint was still wet. After, they went to go-kart race. Their go- kart was very fast, but they could not win. They was very sad. Biff said “Don’t worry” “Silver-Bullet’s still the best.” Then, they got silver-bullet win a prize. It was the best looking go-kart. They was so happy.
This story was very interesting. There were accident. And, I think that they made wonderful go-kart.
I am sorry. I could not find a picture.
[158 words]
2010年1月21日木曜日
book review
Come In
Dad was painting the door. Mum went out. Wilf and Wilma came to play. Dad said “Come in”. After, three children came to the house. They came to play with Biff. Biff said “Come in”. And, four children came to the house. They came to play with Chip. Chip said “Come in”. So, five children came to play. They wanted to play with Kipper. Kipper said “Come in”. When Mum got back home, there are a lot of children in house. Mum was surprised. Mum was angry because Biff, Chip and Kipper were watching TV. After, Mum gave the children some biscuits. They all went home. When Mum opened the door, there were a lot of dogs in outside. Mum said “Oh no”.
This story was very interesting.
Dad was painting the door. Mum went out. Wilf and Wilma came to play. Dad said “Come in”. After, three children came to the house. They came to play with Biff. Biff said “Come in”. And, four children came to the house. They came to play with Chip. Chip said “Come in”. So, five children came to play. They wanted to play with Kipper. Kipper said “Come in”. When Mum got back home, there are a lot of children in house. Mum was surprised. Mum was angry because Biff, Chip and Kipper were watching TV. After, Mum gave the children some biscuits. They all went home. When Mum opened the door, there were a lot of dogs in outside. Mum said “Oh no”.
This story was very interesting.
[140 words]
2010年1月16日土曜日
book review
House for sale
One day, there was for sale house. She name was Biff. Her father liked the house. Mum liked too. Her brother name were Chip and Kipper. Kipper was very mischief. He pulled the wallpaper. They went into a room. Kipper looked up the chimney. Biff wanted this bedroom. When they went a bedroom, Kipper jumped on the bed. Then, it was outbreak house dust. Chip wanted to bedroom too. Chip’s bedroom was big. There were a chair. When Kipper sat on a chair, it was break. After, they went down the garden. They found at the tree house. Kipper climbed the tree. Kipper pulled a can down there. Kipper was very dirty. Everyone liked the house.
This story was very interesting because Kipper mess nothing but mess. When I read a this story, I was very laugh.I am sorry. Not picture.
[150 words]
One day, there was for sale house. She name was Biff. Her father liked the house. Mum liked too. Her brother name were Chip and Kipper. Kipper was very mischief. He pulled the wallpaper. They went into a room. Kipper looked up the chimney. Biff wanted this bedroom. When they went a bedroom, Kipper jumped on the bed. Then, it was outbreak house dust. Chip wanted to bedroom too. Chip’s bedroom was big. There were a chair. When Kipper sat on a chair, it was break. After, they went down the garden. They found at the tree house. Kipper climbed the tree. Kipper pulled a can down there. Kipper was very dirty. Everyone liked the house.
This story was very interesting because Kipper mess nothing but mess. When I read a this story, I was very laugh.I am sorry. Not picture.
[150 words]
book review
Wheels
Wheels were used somewhere. Car, train, airplane, bike, bicycle, ship and etc…
If there were no wheels? This story was very easy but, I was very thinking.I am sorry. Not picture.
[37 words]
Wheels were used somewhere. Car, train, airplane, bike, bicycle, ship and etc…
If there were no wheels? This story was very easy but, I was very thinking.I am sorry. Not picture.
[37 words]
book review
The secret room
Biff and chip liked the new house. They helped Mum and Dad. I think that they were great. Biff was in her room. Biff was thinking new wallpaper. They went to wallpaper shop. They bought new wallpapers. When they changed wallpaper, Biff found a door. Mum opened the door. The room was darkness. They found little house in the room. Biff said “It looks like our house.” Biff opened the little house. Everyone looked inside. She said “It looks like our house inside.”After, Biff was in bed. She was fast asleep.
This story was very interesting. I think that she was very exciting.I am sorry. Not picture.
[117 words]
Biff and chip liked the new house. They helped Mum and Dad. I think that they were great. Biff was in her room. Biff was thinking new wallpaper. They went to wallpaper shop. They bought new wallpapers. When they changed wallpaper, Biff found a door. Mum opened the door. The room was darkness. They found little house in the room. Biff said “It looks like our house.” Biff opened the little house. Everyone looked inside. She said “It looks like our house inside.”After, Biff was in bed. She was fast asleep.
This story was very interesting. I think that she was very exciting.I am sorry. Not picture.
[117 words]
book review
The balloon
When the children were outside, they found a hot balloon. Then, Mrs May had a secret. She wanted to go in a balloon. Wilf and Wilma came home. They had a letter. The school wanted money. Wilf had an good idea.Everyone liked Wilf’s idea. Everyone said, “It’s good idea.” Her idea was got on hot a balloon. Everyone bought tickets. Mrs May bought lots of tickets. She wanted to go in the balloon. After, she challenged a lot. And, She won the prize. She won a ride in the balloon. When she ride in the balloon, she took a photograph.
This story was very interesting because Mrs May was childish. So, I think good that she could ride in the balloon.I am sorry. Not picture.
[140 words]
When the children were outside, they found a hot balloon. Then, Mrs May had a secret. She wanted to go in a balloon. Wilf and Wilma came home. They had a letter. The school wanted money. Wilf had an good idea.Everyone liked Wilf’s idea. Everyone said, “It’s good idea.” Her idea was got on hot a balloon. Everyone bought tickets. Mrs May bought lots of tickets. She wanted to go in the balloon. After, she challenged a lot. And, She won the prize. She won a ride in the balloon. When she ride in the balloon, she took a photograph.
This story was very interesting because Mrs May was childish. So, I think good that she could ride in the balloon.I am sorry. Not picture.
[140 words]
2010年1月10日日曜日
book review
David and the GIANT
David looked after his father’s sheep. Lion came to steal a sheep, but he killed the lion. David’s land started war. His brothers went off to fight. David could not go fight because he was too young. One day, his father said, “You must take some food to your brothers.” After, he walked all the way to the top of a hill. When he arrived at there, war started. Then, across the valley came a giant. The giant was big and strong. David said “I fight.” But, he was stopped by his brothers. So, the king said, “Let David go.” And, he fought to giant. He picked up stone, and threw it. It hit giant between eyes. And, giant fell down dead. And, giant’s army ran away. Finally, David became to a great king.
This story was interesting. David was very strong.
[144 words]David looked after his father’s sheep. Lion came to steal a sheep, but he killed the lion. David’s land started war. His brothers went off to fight. David could not go fight because he was too young. One day, his father said, “You must take some food to your brothers.” After, he walked all the way to the top of a hill. When he arrived at there, war started. Then, across the valley came a giant. The giant was big and strong. David said “I fight.” But, he was stopped by his brothers. So, the king said, “Let David go.” And, he fought to giant. He picked up stone, and threw it. It hit giant between eyes. And, giant fell down dead. And, giant’s army ran away. Finally, David became to a great king.
This story was interesting. David was very strong.
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