Book Reviw 9

Rotten apples

Biff wanted to help Mum, so Mum gave her a job. Mum said, “Pick up the apples so I can cut the grass”. Biff picked up an apple, and then she found these apples rotten. And, Mum said, “Put them in the box”. When Biff put the box of apples by the dustbin, her friend comes. Her friend name is Kipper. He said, “Come and see this!” She said, “What is it?” He said, “Come and see!” A man with a horse and cart came down the street. The man name is Harry Smith. Everyone likes him because he makes people laugh. He sells things from his cart. Biffs Mum bought some logs. The logs were heavy, so Harry Smith helped Mum to carry them. And then, Biff looked at the house. She asked him “Can we give the horse an apple?” He said, “Yes.” She picked up an apple. The horse found the box of apples. She might think that the horse is unbelievable because the horse ate all rotten apples. I think that when the horse ate rotten apples, the horse broke stomach. [187 words]