book review

The secret room
Biff and chip liked the new house. They helped Mum and Dad. I think that they were great. Biff was in her room. Biff was thinking new wallpaper. They went to wallpaper shop. They bought new wallpapers. When they changed wallpaper, Biff found a door. Mum opened the door. The room was darkness. They found little house in the room. Biff said “It looks like our house.” Biff opened the little house. Everyone looked inside. She said “It looks like our house inside.”After, Biff was in bed. She was fast asleep.
This story was very interesting. I think that she was very exciting.I am sorry. Not picture.
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