2010年1月16日土曜日

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House for sale

One day, there was for sale house. She name was Biff. Her father liked the house. Mum liked too. Her brother name were Chip and Kipper. Kipper was very mischief. He pulled the wallpaper. They went into a room. Kipper looked up the chimney. Biff wanted this bedroom. When they went a bedroom, Kipper jumped on the bed. Then, it was outbreak house dust. Chip wanted to bedroom too. Chip’s bedroom was big. There were a chair. When Kipper sat on a chair, it was break. After, they went down the garden. They found at the tree house. Kipper climbed the tree. Kipper pulled a can down there. Kipper was very dirty. Everyone liked the house.
This story was very interesting because Kipper mess nothing but mess. When I read a this story, I was very laugh.I am sorry. Not picture.
[150 words]

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Wheels
Wheels were used somewhere. Car, train, airplane, bike, bicycle, ship and etc…
If there were no wheels? This story was very easy but, I was very thinking.I am sorry. Not picture.
[37 words]

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The secret room
Biff and chip liked the new house. They helped Mum and Dad. I think that they were great. Biff was in her room. Biff was thinking new wallpaper. They went to wallpaper shop. They bought new wallpapers. When they changed wallpaper, Biff found a door. Mum opened the door. The room was darkness. They found little house in the room. Biff said “It looks like our house.” Biff opened the little house. Everyone looked inside. She said “It looks like our house inside.”After, Biff was in bed. She was fast asleep.
This story was very interesting. I think that she was very exciting.I am sorry. Not picture.
[117 words]

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The balloon

When the children were outside, they found a hot balloon. Then, Mrs May had a secret. She wanted to go in a balloon. Wilf and Wilma came home. They had a letter. The school wanted money. Wilf had an good idea.Everyone liked Wilf’s idea. Everyone said, “It’s good idea.” Her idea was got on hot a balloon. Everyone bought tickets. Mrs May bought lots of tickets. She wanted to go in the balloon. After, she challenged a lot. And, She won the prize. She won a ride in the balloon. When she ride in the balloon, she took a photograph.
This story was very interesting because Mrs May was childish. So, I think good that she could ride in the balloon.I am sorry. Not picture.
[140 words]

2010年1月10日日曜日

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David and the GIANT
David looked after his father’s sheep. Lion came to steal a sheep, but he killed the lion. David’s land started war. His brothers went off to fight. David could not go fight because he was too young. One day, his father said, “You must take some food to your brothers.” After, he walked all the way to the top of a hill. When he arrived at there, war started. Then, across the valley came a giant. The giant was big and strong. David said “I fight.” But, he was stopped by his brothers. So, the king said, “Let David go.” And, he fought to giant. He picked up stone, and threw it. It hit giant between eyes. And, giant fell down dead. And, giant’s army ran away. Finally, David became to a great king.
This story was interesting. David was very strong.
[144 words]

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Bones
Human has 206 bones. Bones are hidden under the skin. Human cannot move without bones. My bones started out small, so bones grow up. The smallest bones are inside ears. And, the biggest bones are in legs. Some of bones act as armor. Rib protects my heart. Skull is covered with my brain. By the way, long ago, pirates used flag with a skull and crossbones, but today , a skull and crossbones means danger and poison.
I could learn about bones. This story was very simple.
I am sorry. Not picture.
[91 words]

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