book review

The Go-Kart Race
Wilma and Biff saw a notice. It was about a go-kart race. Then, Wilma had good idea. Biff and Wilma were excited. They told Mum about the race. Mum found the old go-kart, but it was broken and rusty. Biff said “Oh no!”. Biff asked to Dad about repair go-kart. After, Mum and Dad made a new go-kart. Mum painted the go-kart. Chip helped to Mum. When Biff looked at the new go-kart, she wanted a go. But, Mum said she couldn’t. The paint was still wet. After, they went to go-kart race. Their go- kart was very fast, but they could not win. They was very sad. Biff said “Don’t worry” “Silver-Bullet’s still the best.” Then, they got silver-bullet win a prize. It was the best looking go-kart. They was so happy.
This story was very interesting. There were accident. And, I think that they made wonderful go-kart.
I am sorry. I could not find a picture.
[158 words]

book review

Come In
Dad was painting the door. Mum went out. Wilf and Wilma came to play. Dad said “Come in”. After, three children came to the house. They came to play with Biff. Biff said “Come in”. And, four children came to the house. They came to play with Chip. Chip said “Come in”. So, five children came to play. They wanted to play with Kipper. Kipper said “Come in”. When Mum got back home, there are a lot of children in house. Mum was surprised. Mum was angry because Biff, Chip and Kipper were watching TV. After, Mum gave the children some biscuits. They all went home. When Mum opened the door, there were a lot of dogs in outside. Mum said “Oh no”.
This story was very interesting.

[140 words]